Lake House edit

[dukealien]

Liking the edits very much, can't see any more issues or unwanted ambiguities.

Spare my blushes in  the title, though - it's your poem    .

Well, I was reading old threads even before my day, and they always posted edits that way, just a nod to those that helped workshop it. I’ll remove it if you insist but it’s only us that sees it anyway .

No, no!  Far be it from me to criticize honored customs from times before mine.