Lake House edit
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Liking the edits very much, can't see any more issues or unwanted ambiguities.

Spare my blushes in  the title, though - it's your poem  Smile  .
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Lake House edit - by wasellajam - 02-03-2026, 03:11 AM
RE: Lake House - by dukealien - 02-03-2026, 11:22 AM
RE: Lake House - by wasellajam - 02-03-2026, 06:33 PM
RE: Lake House - by dukealien - 02-03-2026, 11:24 PM
RE: Lake House - by wasellajam - 02-03-2026, 11:39 PM
RE: Lake House - by wasellajam - 02-04-2026, 07:28 AM
RE: Lake House edit (duke) - by dukealien - 02-04-2026, 08:20 AM
RE: Lake House edit (duke) - by wasellajam - 02-04-2026, 08:27 AM
RE: Lake House edit (duke) - by dukealien - 02-04-2026, 09:08 AM



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