Four Quintillion Blows - edit
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Four Quintillion Blows


Microscopic hammers falling
make no dent, leave us recalling
carpet-bombing rearranging
landscapes into silent wastes.

Blanketed and suffocated
under white, anticipated,
interlocking ninja spin-stars,
glassy flakes in drifts of tricks.

Like a judo master throwing
his opponent, all this snowing
uses our own speed to smash us
into sidewalks with no mat.

One quintillion satin hammers–
pretty, pratfall coccyx-slammers–
make one inch of peaceful snowfall
bright in sunlight: I’ll stay home.



original version;

Microscopic hammers falling
make no dent, leave us recalling
carpet-bombing rearranging
landscapes into silent wastes.

Blanketed and suffocated
under white, anticipated,
interlocking, light as feathers,
crystal flakes for blurring hours.

Like a judo master throwing
his opponent, all this snowing
uses our own speed to smash us
into sidewalks with no mat.

One quintillion satin hammers–
pretty, pratfall coccyx-slammers–
make one inch of peaceful snowfall
bright in sunlight: I’ll stay home.

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Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by dukealien - 02-01-2026, 01:07 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - by milo - 02-01-2026, 02:44 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - by wasellajam - 02-01-2026, 08:28 PM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by dukealien - 02-02-2026, 06:09 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by milo - 02-02-2026, 06:19 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by wasellajam - 02-02-2026, 06:20 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by johnnyjojo - 02-28-2026, 12:04 PM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by dukealien - 03-01-2026, 05:06 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by johnnyjojo - 03-01-2026, 10:33 AM



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