The PigPen's Resplendent Kaffeeklatsch
Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin

My current favorite from just mercedes from the Sestina practice threads, attention all those who think forms are hooey.

I live alone, in the bush, just below
McInally mountain, part of the high
alpine range. Canberra’s lights reflect
from clouds to the north, their shine
reduced by distance to a glow. My river
joins the Murrumbidgee, becomes their water.

I generate power, pump my own water,
collect firewood for free, fish in the pools below.
I watch from my bed, look down on the river
for food, like a kingfisher perching on high
but I can’t fly like him, a fast arrow shine
of blue. I am lonely, blue too, I reflect.

As I finish work I hear loud music, reflect
on loneliness, decide a bourbon and water
before driving home might put a shine
on my day. I stand at the bar chatting; below
on the dance floor dancers gyrate, high
on energy, moving like a flooded river.

It’s been raining. I wonder if I’ll cross the river
tonight. If I can’t see the white rock reflect
in the crossing, the river is running too high
for me. I’ve already lost a car to the water
this year. The rock shows the safe level below.
I won’t cross if I can’t see it shine.

In the bar’s darkness, teeth and eyes shine.
I meet a man with dark hair like a river
that flows down his back. He gestures below
to the dancers. His welcoming eyes reflect
my smile. He leads, I follow like water
this stranger. I want him. I want to get high

on music, dancing, getting to know him, high
on life again. I laugh, and watch his eyes shine
like ripples of moonlight playing on water.
Something’s starting. As raindrops join in a river
we’re moving together. Our shadows reflect
only one. We’re joined above and below.

We stand high on a cliff overlooking a river
through new land. Stars shine around us, reflect
new patterns emerging in the water below.
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The PigPen's Resplendent Kaffeeklatsch - by milo - 01-06-2026, 12:26 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-06-2026, 12:39 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 12:41 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Tiger the Lion - 01-06-2026, 12:45 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-06-2026, 12:47 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 12:47 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-06-2026, 12:56 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 12:59 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 08:32 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-06-2026, 10:30 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 10:33 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-06-2026, 10:43 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Tiger the Lion - 01-06-2026, 12:01 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-06-2026, 12:24 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 11:10 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-06-2026, 11:39 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-06-2026, 07:34 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-07-2026, 12:25 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-07-2026, 12:30 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-07-2026, 12:32 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-07-2026, 12:59 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-07-2026, 02:08 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-07-2026, 03:16 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-07-2026, 11:02 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-07-2026, 08:10 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-07-2026, 08:32 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-07-2026, 11:30 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-08-2026, 12:10 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-08-2026, 06:23 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Tiger the Lion - 01-08-2026, 06:46 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by busker - 01-08-2026, 06:51 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-08-2026, 06:54 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by busker - 01-08-2026, 06:58 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-08-2026, 07:05 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-08-2026, 07:52 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-08-2026, 07:54 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-08-2026, 08:49 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-08-2026, 09:17 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-08-2026, 10:47 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Tiger the Lion - 01-09-2026, 12:08 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-09-2026, 03:26 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 12:40 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 03:38 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-09-2026, 04:20 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 04:29 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by gruff - 01-09-2026, 08:14 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 08:22 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-09-2026, 11:50 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-10-2026, 12:02 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-10-2026, 12:03 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-09-2026, 09:58 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 09:59 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by gruff - 01-09-2026, 10:04 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 10:07 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-09-2026, 11:27 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-10-2026, 12:06 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by Quixilated - 01-10-2026, 12:31 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-10-2026, 12:45 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-10-2026, 11:48 PM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-11-2026, 02:41 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-11-2026, 02:46 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by wasellajam - 01-11-2026, 03:25 AM
RE: Coffee Lounge - by milo - 01-11-2026, 03:34 AM
RE: Milo's Resplendent Kaffeeklatsch - by milo - 01-12-2026, 08:19 AM
RE: The PigPen's Resplendent Kaffeeklatsch - by wasellajam - 01-28-2026, 10:46 AM



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