01-11-2026, 05:02 AM
@milo, thank you again for commenting!
would you say this doesnt work as a cleave poem because its not two different poems acting together to make a third, but rather uses unnecessary spacing for what all is really the same thing?
And would they not work as dizains because I use only two rhymes instead of four?
It reads a little like a cut up which bothers me
Also I dont understand what you mean by feminine rhyme
would you say this doesnt work as a cleave poem because its not two different poems acting together to make a third, but rather uses unnecessary spacing for what all is really the same thing?
And would they not work as dizains because I use only two rhymes instead of four?
It reads a little like a cut up which bothers me
Also I dont understand what you mean by feminine rhyme