01-09-2026, 12:08 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-09-2026, 12:09 AM by Tiger the Lion.)
Quix does most of the heavy lifting here so I'm happy to defer to her. She is accurate in saying almost nobody has been banned for posting without critiquing first. (unless that is coupled with Mod abuse or ignoring warnings) There really isn't a significant change to be made. If anything I might suggest rather than a scary. red lettered warning, we may be able to write a (standard greeting/thanks for posting/why crit is important/look forward to more) type response in a less ominous colour.
Hello Milo and welcome to the Pigpen. Thanks for sharing your poem with us and we look forward to more from you. In the meantime please try your hand at providing feedback to others. It is a vital part of learning and integral to how the site functions. See you in the threads.
Mod/Admin
Of course the poorly written sample above would be improved upon. We may already have something similar that Quix wrote in the INTROS thread.
Hello Milo and welcome to the Pigpen. Thanks for sharing your poem with us and we look forward to more from you. In the meantime please try your hand at providing feedback to others. It is a vital part of learning and integral to how the site functions. See you in the threads.
Mod/Admin
Of course the poorly written sample above would be improved upon. We may already have something similar that Quix wrote in the INTROS thread.