01-05-2026, 05:26 PM
Hi Milo, long time away, but saw your message and wanted to stop by to say thanks.
Quite simply i love this. Completely out of practice with both writing and critique - I have been hibernating what little creativity i once disported and reverted once more to being a darling bud of nervous quivers and a decided lack of substance - spring is coming to this part of world soon - I'm sure if i returned the site, growth and development would follow, because this is the best poetry site for growth.
So this is supposed to be feed back and you have specifically mention the ship alternatives.
I have always liked the word sound and imagery of a coracle - a one man, small and crap vessel carried on the back and launched whenever water is chanced upon; it drifts in circles of indeterminate vagueness, whilst somehow achieving it's desired destination. (Added bonus points from the title - the woven or hide covering is covered in pitch / bitumen). AJ
Quite simply i love this. Completely out of practice with both writing and critique - I have been hibernating what little creativity i once disported and reverted once more to being a darling bud of nervous quivers and a decided lack of substance - spring is coming to this part of world soon - I'm sure if i returned the site, growth and development would follow, because this is the best poetry site for growth.
So this is supposed to be feed back and you have specifically mention the ship alternatives.
I have always liked the word sound and imagery of a coracle - a one man, small and crap vessel carried on the back and launched whenever water is chanced upon; it drifts in circles of indeterminate vagueness, whilst somehow achieving it's desired destination. (Added bonus points from the title - the woven or hide covering is covered in pitch / bitumen). AJ