The Misfire

[milo]

Yes, hospital poems are terribly tedious. I hope some of them are important for others to read, but it can feel a bit like literary onanism. I have waded through and attempted to make the narration/subject clearer. But now I’m adding more to it so I can cut it down to something more incisive, less like therapy. So I will let the next few drafts remain unshared. Thanks for your feedback!

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To clarify, I meant hospitals are tedious, it is a trope.  Hospital poems can be quite good, I have written half a dozen or so myself, I am sure

Thanks