12-27-2025, 09:53 AM
(11-07-2025, 08:47 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: My dad ran my songs through A.I. Perfect meter in this line. I love it.Interesting subject matter. But my personal inclination would be to perfect the meter and otherwise try to write it so that even a ten year old kid could immediately understand it.
without my permission.
I have to admit it made me cry
Hearing my words and chords with precision
Strings and flutes and vocal runs Perfect meter in this line also. But it's a different meter.
An entire orchestra hitting me
in the stomach, I was done
My dad laughed and asked why
It's your song its your words just listen
It was so clean I wanted to die
Witnessing the actualization of my vision
Dreaming if id ever had the funds
An entire orchestra hitting you
In the soul, knowing there's no one
I do love the sound of my voice, no lie
My forms and compositions
My inability to sing in key, i cant deny
Though the temptations I don't understand this line.

