Fall's Lament(edit)

Fall's Lament(edit)

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12-17-2025, 06:56 AM

Hi! I’m newer to giving critique, but one suggestion that stood out to me is that the ending might feel even stronger if the feeling of regret were implied rather than stated directly. An image or moment that lets the emotion emerge on its own could resonate stronger Smile

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Fall's Lament(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 12-13-2025, 01:08 PM

RE: Fall's Lament - by busker - 12-13-2025, 08:18 PM

RE: Fall's Lament - by brynmawr1 - 12-15-2025, 12:58 PM

RE: Fall's Lament - by tweetywrites - 12-17-2025, 06:56 AM

RE: Fall's Lament - by whisperer - 12-20-2025, 09:42 PM

RE: Fall's Lament(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 12-22-2025, 01:27 PM

RE: Fall's Lament(edit) - by busker - 12-22-2025, 06:39 PM

RE: Fall's Lament(edit) - by whisperer - 12-22-2025, 09:11 PM

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