Winter’s bar graph rises
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(12-16-2025, 12:50 AM)thewilderhen Wrote:  the neighbor pulls into the drive way, tires crunching
ice so cold it sounds like waves closing over.
This year the lake will freeze before Christmas,
one bright spot in a year of humanity’s shit.

(Author’s note: can I swear on here?)

Not only can you swear, you may. 

In this case, the vulgarity is an effective late turn revealing the speaker's attitude toward a phenomenon theretofore only  described.

I guess it's different near a lake - in mid-continental agrarian regions dry snow mixes with ash from the final stubble-burn-off of the year to form a cement-like material called "snert."  It gets into everything and stays until May.  But at the very beginning it does look pretty.
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Winter’s bar graph rises - by thewilderhen - 12-16-2025, 12:50 AM
RE: Winter’s bar graph rises - by dukealien - 12-16-2025, 12:15 PM
RE: Winter’s bar graph rises - by thewilderhen - 12-17-2025, 03:50 AM



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