12-09-2025, 09:26 PM
Ty for your kind words, Evan, but I rather think busker is right, and as a consequence I have abandoned this poem. I cannot get it to work, and my source material (medieval mystical texts) is full of imagery and ideas that have become cliche, so either I ignore my own source material or my poem will be full of cliches, too. Marguerite Porete deserves a better poem than anything I could write!

