12-08-2025, 08:16 AM
(12-07-2025, 11:17 AM)busker Wrote:Appreciated, Busker. There's a few things I might do differently, but 7 years later, I don't hate it.(06-29-2018, 05:26 AM)busker Wrote:Revisiting this, I take back what I said.(06-06-2018, 02:21 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: A Widowed Muse
To be sure, you'll outlive me
you with your quinoa
and your couscous
and your mornings in the gym
mornings I'm lucky to wake
from whatever poisons I take
to wiggle the pen at night
to scribble in ink
to put a piece of you to paper
to be sure you'll outlive me.
Thesudden rhyme in the middle is disconcerting.
Wiggling the pen is unintentionally hilarious
This is a fine poem.

