Yesterday, 07:11 AM
In no way do I see your critique as harsh.
The only reason I capitalize the very first word is because it's an old habit that just won't die.
I don't capitalize god, I know, for he isn't important as humans transcended him.
Otherwise, thank you for the critique. It's helpful. The small compliment too.
The only reason I capitalize the very first word is because it's an old habit that just won't die.
I don't capitalize god, I know, for he isn't important as humans transcended him.
Otherwise, thank you for the critique. It's helpful. The small compliment too.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.