11-15-2025, 06:34 PM
Where heaven dissolves
Worldview disintegrating.
A pill, a tab, a liquid -
Bottled heaven,
For as long as it lasts.
The codependency
Urges my return.
The color spectrum shifts
When these help me to see.
Others see deterioration
In my bones,
Whilst I stay here,
To slowly disappear.
Without thoughts -
Disorganized.
Agony in my veins.
It's too late now
To realize
It drove me insane.
Worldview disintegrating.
A pill, a tab, a liquid -
Bottled heaven,
For as long as it lasts.
The codependency
Urges my return.
The color spectrum shifts
When these help me to see.
Others see deterioration
In my bones,
Whilst I stay here,
To slowly disappear.
Without thoughts -
Disorganized.
Agony in my veins.
It's too late now
To realize
It drove me insane.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.