LPiA-25 Nov. 8
#11
Illuminating illuminati.

The watching eye,
Hidden in a triangle 
Of doom.

Rich and powerful,
Control their audience.

To rule -
Yet we never know
They have power,
They haven't shown.

So make friends,
not enemies.
It's the eye
that encloses 
All it 
sees.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
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LPiA-25 Nov. 8 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-08-2025, 09:36 AM
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