LPiA-25 Nov. 6
#11
walk the Walkman

Walk, 
Said the Walkman.
No cassette in sight.
It won't go down with a -
Fight.

Clipped onto my pants,
Freeing my hands.
Shuffling in the street,
To my destination.

A cassette store,
That won't return,
I'll have to walk a lot,
Even when it burns.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
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LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2025, 10:28 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by CRNDLSM - 11-06-2025, 11:11 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by Todd - 11-06-2025, 01:38 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by Keith - 11-12-2025, 05:36 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by Weeded - 11-06-2025, 05:34 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by busker - 11-06-2025, 07:07 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by dukealien - 11-07-2025, 12:12 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by rowens - 11-07-2025, 10:32 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by RiverNotch - 11-11-2025, 07:27 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by Mostly Holy - 11-11-2025, 10:10 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 6 - by MidaPoems - 11-15-2025, 05:50 AM



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