11-15-2025, 05:46 AM
The unlucky strangers
A black cat,
Unlucky?
Lucky to have seen,
That which the moonÂ
Can't appreciate.
I try to approach,
For it hisses me away,
In awe, I decay.
Maybe it was true,
A black cat is unlucky -
Or was it
You?
A black cat,
Unlucky?
Lucky to have seen,
That which the moonÂ
Can't appreciate.
I try to approach,
For it hisses me away,
In awe, I decay.
Maybe it was true,
A black cat is unlucky -
Or was it
You?
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.