11-15-2025, 05:42 AM
Calculating from scratch
Calculating I might win,
To end where I begin.
Fathomably low,
I scratch away.
For the numbers to portray --
What I need.
All correct
Except the last,
The rush wasn't meant -
To last.
A small price to pay,
in the game,
the game of luck.
Calculating I might win,
To end where I begin.
Fathomably low,
I scratch away.
For the numbers to portray --
What I need.
All correct
Except the last,
The rush wasn't meant -
To last.
A small price to pay,
in the game,
the game of luck.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.