LPiA-25 Nov. 12
#8
stairbound

To get up the stairs,
These wheels won't let --
It be.

Not trying each day,
No progress
No relapse -
held back by wheels,
I crawl.

Hands aching -
Chairs passing by.
Walls chanting my name.
Never was I in it 
For fame.

After hours 
Of regret,
The final goal
Is met.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
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LPiA-25 Nov. 12 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-12-2025, 11:01 AM
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RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 12 - by Todd - 11-12-2025, 01:08 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 12 - by Mostly Holy - 11-13-2025, 04:40 AM
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RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 12 - by MidaPoems - 11-15-2025, 05:39 AM



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