LPiA-25 Nov. 9
#10
Geometry of a home

All shapes,
All forms.

Without houses,
Wouldn't be homes.
Crooked teeth don't attract,
So will crooked houses.

Not inhabited,
Collapsing.
Stress builds -
anchors crack.

What shapes could they be?
If not for geometry.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-09-2025, 09:55 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by Todd - 11-09-2025, 01:13 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by CRNDLSM - 11-10-2025, 02:28 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by busker - 11-10-2025, 06:46 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by dukealien - 11-10-2025, 04:33 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by Keith - 11-12-2025, 03:22 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by busker - 11-12-2025, 04:20 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by rowens - 11-12-2025, 11:35 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by brynmawr1 - 11-13-2025, 08:22 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 9 - by MidaPoems - 11-15-2025, 05:33 AM



Users browsing this thread: 2 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!