The third person view

[MidaPoems]

Alienated I am,
For it is -
What I see.

A human,
Detached from me.

Not fully true,
In the eyes.
Eyes,
Of the unforgotten.
Eyes of the living -
Mimicking death.

Alienated I be,
Still I see -
A clear view.

I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language, as my poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
A clear view.