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Open your eyes
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11-14-2025, 10:00 AM
Heya Sun! Thanks both for the comments; I think I will have to go away and have a think about this one, each time I pour over it I just get the urge to rip it apart and start from the ground up! Once I've deliberated and made some changes I will post the revised version. Thanks again!
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Open your eyes - by TheCryptCreeper - 11-07-2025, 04:33 AM
RE: Look up - by Mostly Holy - 11-07-2025, 06:35 AM
RE: Look up - by TheCryptCreeper - 11-11-2025, 09:51 AM
RE: Open your eyes - by Mostly Holy - 11-11-2025, 11:15 AM
RE: Open your eyes - by sun_sparks - 11-11-2025, 03:03 PM
RE: Open your eyes - by TheCryptCreeper - 11-14-2025, 10:00 AM
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