06-01-2010, 06:02 PM
i have no idea what it says but i love it
form the title i'd take a stab at how we construct a poem
the write the edit the 2nd edit etc.
i think it's light and sweet with a hint of ironic mirth
i think it's very very good. thanks for the read. ds.
hope to see a few more from you as time and trains move on
form the title i'd take a stab at how we construct a poem
the write the edit the 2nd edit etc.
i think it's light and sweet with a hint of ironic mirth

i think it's very very good. thanks for the read. ds.
hope to see a few more from you as time and trains move on
