Realising Mother

[Keith]

I think I know what this poem is about though I'm hesitant to assume I'm right. I love that this poem has technological sci fi related themes and the little rhyming in the poem. The first stanza definitely got me interested and the imagery is strong.

Thanks for the read

Thanks for the comments Bunx, i think it needs some work, like you say, a bit vague. Im just trying to kick start myself into writing something. Best Keith