Thank you for your kind words. Like all my attempts at a villanelle, I consider this close to a total failure, altho I had hoped it was at least clear, haha. I see now I have fallen well short of my aim, especially if you did not realise until the closing quatrain that this is a poem about politics and ideology! Oh well, back to the drawing board, at least you liked some of my imagery :joy:
Thank you again, this is exactly the kind of feedback I need to learn when to drop an idea that is not working, you have no idea how many revisions I have already made of this!
Thank you again, this is exactly the kind of feedback I need to learn when to drop an idea that is not working, you have no idea how many revisions I have already made of this!