Insecurity

[whisperer]

I love the honesty of the struggles we all have with the monsters in our heads. You've captured this struggle and the emotions that come tethered to that very nicely. My only suggestion is that sometimes less is more. Some of the stanzas seem repetitive. It's a wonderful message, I agree, but saying the same thing over and over doesn't make it more impactful. See if you can tighten it up and compact some of that emotion in a shorter and more impactful piece. I love you line breaks, it reads well and adds just enough pace to add emotion. Your imagery and narration is great too. I can "hear" all the different voices speaking. Well done and thanks for sharing.