11-05-2025, 10:53 AM
whisperer dateline='[url=tel:1762000250' Wrote: 1762000250[/url]']I like the how anthemic theme matches the rhythm. I get a sense of a group of protesters marching when reading. I always suggest reading a piece out loud to check the meter. Enjoyed this!
There are screams in the streets of what is right
Voices lift in one impassioned song.
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight.
The masses stand, a staggering sight
If ev’ryone's right then is everyone wrong?
There are screams in the streets of what is right
The military shows its strength and might.
The marching lines are drawn and standing strong
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight
Marching and chanting from dusk until light
Flowing like a river rushing headstrong
There are screams in the streets of what is right
For all the clamor that can't be put to light
Sides clash with each other's prong.
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight.
Will you stand quiet and alone tonight,
Or will you walk the path laid out long?
There are screams in the streets of what is right
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight
*I specifically need help with line #14.

