10 hours ago
Hi Tun
This reads like a series of thoughts one might have by an end of life bedside the use of Geoffrey creates a time stamp on whole piece moving the reader along with each though, very much enjoyed your poem and I found your reference to breathing very poignant.
This reads like a series of thoughts one might have by an end of life bedside the use of Geoffrey creates a time stamp on whole piece moving the reader along with each though, very much enjoyed your poem and I found your reference to breathing very poignant.
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out