Grey Area
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(09-30-2025, 09:49 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Grey Area

If the universe
had feelings before it all
was light a mistake?

Blackholes expose us.
Silence swallows mysteries
of abandoned hopes.

When a star goes out
space between foreign suns
mourn the horizon.

Things that could have been
will make assholes of us all.
Laying down stars fall.
In this one I can understand the first stanza. It's a question that one can ask, but then after that I don't understand what they're saying you know like you know -

when a space between foreign Suns mourn the Horizon

I don't know what that is - and I don't know how

things that could have been will make assholes of us all


at all you know or why why the next line rhymes with it or what it's saying. So that's my sense of this one - I don't know what you're saying.
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Messages In This Thread
Grey Area - by Bunx - 09-30-2025, 09:49 AM
RE: Grey Area - by tun - 09-30-2025, 04:41 PM
RE: Grey Area - by Bunx - 09-30-2025, 11:46 PM
RE: Grey Area - by tun - 09-30-2025, 11:55 PM
RE: Grey Area - by Bunx - 10-01-2025, 12:27 AM



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