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09-09-2025, 04:07 AM

This is good – I like it a lot!
I would probably tweak the last line. It feels too simplistic. Maybe change the last stanza? I was expecting a catharsis.

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Hooddom - by rowens - 09-04-2025, 11:56 PM

RE: Hooddom - by adagio - 09-09-2025, 04:07 AM

RE: Hooddom - by rowens - 09-09-2025, 04:33 AM

RE: Hooddom - by adagio - 09-09-2025, 11:43 AM

RE: Hooddom - by rowens - 09-09-2025, 12:23 PM

RE: Hooddom - by adagio - 09-09-2025, 04:18 PM

RE: Hooddom - by rowens - 09-09-2025, 10:24 PM

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