Somewhat a Ghost
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Hello zealot-
The form indicates a conversation, yet it's also very distracting, and makes the poem difficult to follow.

Maybe more, later,
Mark
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Somewhat a Ghost - by poetry_zealot - 04-25-2025, 10:16 PM
RE: Somewhat a Ghost - by Mark A Becker - 04-26-2025, 07:44 AM
RE: Somewhat a Ghost - by busker - 04-26-2025, 03:24 PM



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