2025 NaPM 19 April
#2
High Noon

Upon a clear day, darkness
descends. Silence falls
deeply, under a crimson sky.
Birds have flown, seeking
shelter. A lone centurion
comes to the sudden
realization that something
has gone terribly wrong
with This One.



What he cannot know
is that this moment will
change history, forever...



NOTE: I decided to scratch the last stanza since I didn't think it added anything. Mention of the centurion, and capitalizing This One was enough for a reader to grasp the subject.

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2025 NaPM 19 April - by RiverNotch - 04-18-2025, 07:15 PM
RE: 2025 NaPM 19 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-18-2025, 08:02 PM
RE: 2025 NaPM 19 April - by busker - 04-18-2025, 08:23 PM
RE: 2025 NaPM 19 April - by RiverNotch - 04-19-2025, 12:48 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 19 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-19-2025, 03:02 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 19 April - by dukealien - 04-19-2025, 03:58 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 19 April - by rowens - 04-30-2025, 07:46 AM



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