My first poem

[hyperviolet]

Oh, the numbing spell of light - this seems like a weird line? why is it numbing
Banished by the dead of night
As the sun sets, and dark steals the sky
No haven can keep from what hunts my mind - I think you mean haunts?
As the blaze burns, and fades in the trees
No hope for escape from what I must feel
Her touch on my skin, her voice and breath
Life in their void seems not far from death
A wish for the end, then hope to forget
Can't cut off these chains forged by regret
In dreams I shall seek the warmth I once felt
To cold then wake up in tears of despair - change this to "to now, cold" or smth
Oh, the numbing spell of light
Banished by the dead of night

otherwise I like it!