Looking for original text/author
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The rhythm and sentiment are similar to a Burma-Shave™ poem, except that the last two lines are a bit long to fit on the signs or be read at a glance (this is not disrespectful, Burma-Shave™ jingles were amusing and sometimes pithy).

Must admit, I thought the last line would be more along the lines of, in the race of life, finishing last is as good as finishing with the most toys.  If you wanted a variant that's more cheerful in itself, that could be its theme.
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RE: Looking for original text/author - by CRNDLSM - 03-18-2025, 09:39 PM
RE: Looking for original text/author - by dukealien - 03-18-2025, 09:48 PM



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