Love

[Loveblind]

Simply, Yet nice. I could definitely see the imagery portrayed in this piece. (Despite, the fact your poem wasn't long). Usually, a poem can have all sorts of lines, yet still lack imagery. Your poem goes to show, it's not about the length, but the words actually and how you use them. To me the last couple lines, of the last stanza.. seems like it would read better "I could live with the memories of you(something like that) but, that's just my opinion. Also, I feel as if, it would be better without the word happy. An adjective for happy would be better. Happy is a little to vague. Other than that, I enjoyed this piece.. Keep it up Bianca

Love blind