His Wheels
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(03-09-2025, 06:25 AM)dukealien Wrote:  His Wheels


My father drives a white Tesla.
I know because I saw it
in a dream–

I had to sign for it
before he could drive away
across a frosted sea of glass.

That must be what they’re giving out
these days
instead of wings.
I like the juxtaposition of a white car with the traditional image of white winged horses
The frosted sea of glass image is lovely

It's an unobtrusive little poem that leaves an impact. Nice one.
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His Wheels - by dukealien - 03-09-2025, 06:25 AM
RE: His Wheels - by Mark A Becker - 03-09-2025, 10:38 AM
RE: His Wheels - by busker - 03-10-2025, 08:58 AM
RE: His Wheels - by rowens - 03-10-2025, 12:43 PM
RE: His Wheels - by dukealien - 03-11-2025, 05:28 AM
RE: His Wheels - by carahmellow - 03-11-2025, 01:16 AM



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