03-09-2025, 10:38 AM
(03-09-2025, 06:25 AM)dukealien Wrote: His Wheelswell, Duke, ya done 'im proud.
My father drives a white Tesla.
I know because I saw it
in a dream–
I had to sign for it
before he could drive away
across a frosted sea of glass. great image
That must be what they’re giving out
these days
instead of wings. perfect ending
This is a poignant, yet subtle piece; understated.
The build up to the final stanza works very well.
I wish your father a smooth ride driving along that heavenly highway.
... Mark

