Tardive Dyskinesia
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(12-19-2024, 07:10 AM)Magpie Wrote:  Tardive Dyskinesia i like learning new things

Locked in
a secure ward a medicated occupant maybe a comma after ward? Something to pause
tilts his head back
to compensate for eyeballs rolling
up into a vacant skull. Ii can see it
Mouth begins to gape and drool
drips down disgustingly itits already kinda disgusting yiu don't need to tell me it's disgusting, maybe another word
until a nurse comes along
to realign the cranium subject/patient
towards the dinner plate.

I can't sit
with the other patients I like the ending, it puts me in the hospital, makes it more paranoid, who is upset? Me? The nurses? Everyone? Makes the first part unreliable in some ways.  Big thinker for me here.  Thanks for sharing
-- it upsets them
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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Tardive Dyskinesia - by Magpie - 12-19-2024, 07:10 AM
RE: Tardive Dyskinesia - by CRNDLSM - 12-20-2024, 09:35 AM
RE: Tardive Dyskinesia - by Magpie - 12-20-2024, 03:00 PM
RE: Tardive Dyskinesia - by dukealien - 12-20-2024, 09:54 AM



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