LPiA-24 Nov. 25
#10
A varied lot on this one.

@SwooK - interesting use of repetition.  Are the Beetles first among equals, or only mentioned first on account of the assignment?  Watching the critic at work...

@carahmellow and @Valerie Please - nice compare-and-contrast opportunity here with both choosing the same song.  Occasional rhyme and a tragic story line in one,  a deft triangle of crushes in the other - still unresolved.  Both good.

@busker - another critique or comparison, but with more praise.  A catalog, cross-reference, pantheon.

@CRNDLSM - how it sounds from inside the headphones of the beast.  Good and involving.

@RiverNotch - sort of a rave's progress.  The audio wallpaper of our extended adolescence.
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LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-25-2024, 09:45 AM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by SwooK - 11-25-2024, 10:02 AM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by carahmellow - 11-25-2024, 11:49 AM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by Valerie Please - 11-25-2024, 12:30 PM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by busker - 11-25-2024, 01:33 PM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by RiverNotch - 11-26-2024, 10:38 PM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by dukealien - 11-26-2024, 01:23 AM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by CRNDLSM - 11-26-2024, 08:04 AM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by RiverNotch - 11-26-2024, 01:04 PM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by dukealien - 11-27-2024, 06:41 AM
RE: LPiA-24 Nov. 25 - by Mark A Becker - 11-28-2024, 04:23 AM



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