Love
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(05-31-2010, 01:49 PM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote:  If everything upon the earth
were to melt away;
the mountains, rivers,
and trees.

And the whole universe
just disappeared;
the sun, moon and stars.

And I were standing
on the cold, barren, ground…
I could live
in the memories
of you
and still be happy.

©
i love the way the first two verse builds up to the last.
for me it's sweet and easy to read and understand. and it speaks much more than the three verse it contains. nicely done with this one bianca. Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Love - by Bianca Alabaster - 05-31-2010, 01:49 PM
RE: Love - by billy - 05-31-2010, 02:52 PM
RE: Love - by addy - 05-31-2010, 04:33 PM
RE: Love - by Loveblind - 06-01-2010, 12:25 AM
RE: Love - by Bianca Alabaster - 06-01-2010, 05:33 AM
RE: Love - by mrmod - 06-03-2010, 08:32 AM



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