05-31-2010, 02:24 PM
i sorted out the extraneous bits of code Bianca.
You are the placid pool
beneath a waterfall,
calm after all has fallen. nice mellow image
a soothing poem indeed.
(for me)
while a lot of the images are solid. parts of it feel a little cliche.
thanks for the read as usual Bianca.
You are the placid pool
beneath a waterfall,
calm after all has fallen. nice mellow image
a soothing poem indeed.
(for me)
while a lot of the images are solid. parts of it feel a little cliche.
thanks for the read as usual Bianca.