Allamanda v2

[Mark A Becker]

thanks, edited first stanza (not sure how well -- also not sure how to do second)

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"or else they're trumpets longing for
the breath of angels"?

or is that enjambment too much

Hi River- I like the enjambment better, breaking on ‘for’

Also like the subtle near rhymes- they add an appropriate softness.