10-17-2024, 11:38 AM
(This post was last modified: 10-17-2024, 11:44 AM by RiverNotch.)
thanks, edited first stanza (not sure how well -- also not sure how to do second)
"or else they're trumpets longing for
the breath of angels"?
or is that enjambment too much
"or else they're trumpets longing for
the breath of angels"?
or is that enjambment too much

