Poem: Voice - Help with last line
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I really like this poem I'm working on, but I'm struggling with the last line. I have so many options that could work, but I can't figure out which one works best.. and sounds the most impactful. Maybe you have some ideas.

Voice

Were it Frost who penned
The Raven
Late that dreary night,
Would the masses
Praise the gothic tale
In his simple, golden light?
For his voice is great
And all his own,
Colloquial and bright.
We must remember,
Inside our pen
Breathes a voice;
We must not fight.


We must not fight
We feel is right.
We should not fight.
We should not spite.
Sleeps a voice, we must excite... Kind of leaning toward this.
Hides/holds a voice, we must ignite... i like this one too
delight?
You guys might have some ideas...
I also like holds.... meaning, its not hiding per say.. the pen is just holding your own, personal voice.
what do you relate to the most as a writer yourself?
I can't help laugh at the irony of this post.. but oh well.
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Messages In This Thread
Poem: Voice - Help with last line - by carahmellow - 10-09-2024, 05:04 AM
RE: Poem: Voice - Help with last line - by Bunx - 10-09-2024, 06:41 AM
RE: Poem: Voice - Help with last line - by Knot - 10-10-2024, 02:08 AM
RE: Poem: Voice - Help with last line - by Knot - 10-10-2024, 11:03 PM
RE: Poem: Voice - Help with last line - by Magpie - 10-11-2024, 05:59 AM



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