Sex Death and Sour Cream

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Hey Carah thanks aton!! So stoked you like my poems, I've been meaning to get to yours! I love them all so far too.

As far as this poem goes I've edited it a bunch thinking it might have been worse off with the edits. I'll trying and tighten up the flow and see what I can do the strengthen the message as a whole.

Edit- I tightened up the language surrounding the other theme hoping that it highlights a better flow...

Thanks again Carah