Shadow Boxer

[Tiger the Lion]

Shadow Boxer

Shadow boxing gives me comfort 
I dribble in the dark.
Stark is the contrast to light  
where there's reflection there is might.

My dark silhouette better than I
manifesting magician as if a kite.
Reflecting fearlessness why care.
Does a shadow share isolation snare.

Texting or not, pissing waiting
attempting to sterilize me.
"Judge, jury, executioner, family.
Innocence is what I plead."

Shadow boxing publicize criticize
they take over me, and hypnotize.
Realize this destruction is simply
AI's, cellphone, malfunction destruction.

The hardest part, a destroying moon
when I wake from Sandman's tomb
inside hospital walls within blankets womb.
Shadow boxer fears high noon.


*Hmm anyone think I should post in mild crit eeeek*
Im scarred to

Ultimately we would prefer the bulk of poems to be posted for crit eeeek*. There are exceptions for "Fun" and "Misc" but in the end opinions come anyway, and the critical forums are the heart of the site. On a personal note (and I only say this because you've already spoke of it publicly) if you feel like you're on a bit of a manic swing and have more poems than critiques in you, that is not an issue in the short term, so long as it balances out over time. I've been there myself and would hate for a long term member to drop a poem in the arse simply because they don't have a valid crit in them at the moment. Anyway, you asked for opinions. That's my half-Mod-half-member's opinion.