05-31-2010, 09:51 AM
IMO, Personal poems are better. To me, I can pour out all my feelings and emotions. If it's personal and I am writing about something I've experienced. This was just beautiful. Despite the fact, it being sad.. I enjoyed it. one of my favorites, I've ever read on this site. Also, Rip to your niece 
You spilled your loveliness on all
that you touched, even your life, spinning
your way to eternity, but leaving traces of yourself
in other grateful lives.
^ awesome.
I also like the way you ended this poem.
The only thing I had a problem with was your format.
To me, the poem format seemed more of an essay format.
It would have been clearer and easier to read, if you had stanza's.
Love blind
You spilled your loveliness on all
that you touched, even your life, spinning
your way to eternity, but leaving traces of yourself
in other grateful lives.
^ awesome.
I also like the way you ended this poem.
The only thing I had a problem with was your format.
To me, the poem format seemed more of an essay format.
It would have been clearer and easier to read, if you had stanza's.
Love blind