Love

[billy]

Back from a short hiatus. I told a couple people from school about this website, and to tell their friends. I`m not sure, if they joined however. I`ll continue to tell others though!

gently he grabs
me by my waist
caressing my stomach

arousal has began
deep in
he lays me on the bed
passionately swimming
inside me

water all over him
even left on the sheets
excitement crawling down my spine

the speech my mother gave me
thrown out the window
at, this point
i`m enjoying me and him
making love

thanks LB,
i do enjoy the last verse immensely

for me this one (apart from the last stanza which i love.) comparing it to the head giving poem, feels a little weak and passionless

needs a bit of original spice in my opinion LB. (don't change the last verse though)