Ascension

[Magpie]

Hi Ambrosia,

I enjoyed this.  Made a few suggestions.  My daughter is in her second year at St. Andrews but I haven't had much opportunity to tour Scotland yet.  Hiking Ben Macdui is now on the list.  Beautiful country!
Take care
Bryn

Thanks Bryn, some good suggestions there that solve a couple of problems I had. I did want 'onto' in the third line to be 'over' so changing the first 'over' makes this work. It also makes good sense to cut 'light'. I'm also not sure about the 'and beyond' at the end of the first sentence. It wasn't there originally but then I put it in to express the overall expanse of the view.

I'll think on it and make the edits in a couple of days.

Thanks for the thoughts, they were very useful.

Much appreciated

and Yes, Scotland is very much worth touring, especially the west coast, that's where I'm headed today for the weekend, Ulapool.

Cheers again